![]() ![]() Smile on her face that could cheer up the saddest person. Grandmother died a few months before I was born, so I did not get a chance to know her. Besides my great–grandmother who lived in California, she was the only grandmother I knew and loved. My grandmother and I had always been very close ever Who I loved very much and who I had become incredibly close with was on death's doorstep. Hearing these words was like listening to nails on a chalkboard–very unpleasant and cringe–inducing. Nate Bretches Memoir Rough Draft "The surgeon said the right side of her brain has died and the left side isn't far behind." I could not believe what "Alex, do you know how to play flute?" I called to Me practice, his eyes bright with fascination. Out of the corner of my eye I saw Alex, a cello player, watching The noise wasĭeafening and created a carnival of sound that grew louder with each passing minute. Many of the other students were practicing, talking, giggling, or sharing newly found favorite songs with their friends. While we sat waiting, I was practicing my flute in preparation for our first concert inįrance. Was while we were waiting to board the bus to go the the airport. He had messy brown hair that framed his round face and always wore a big flashy smile. Although we weren't best friends, we were still close with one another His name was Alex Peabody, a 16 year old junior from Ann Arbor, Michigan. Me further insight as to who I was a person, but did not imagine the people I would meet would impact me as much as they did. I knew traveling to a different continent would give International Youth SymphonyOrchestra program where after spending a week at the camp the entire orchestra would be heading off on a six weekĮuropean Tour to share our musical talents and American culture with another part of the world. ![]() The lake glistened before me as my mom and I pulled into Blue Lake Fine Arts Camp just outside Twin Lakes Michigan. Throughout his composition." this is the topic sentence to a short paragraph in the beginning of An example from my first essay is "First and foremost, Gordon Park's imagery This growth happened slowly with a lot of effort put towards it. My father would help me with grammatical errors and final revision decisions in some essays. Growth was the support of both my friends and family. ThisĬomment, along with others, shows me that I am capable to effectively write in one of the worst essays that I have written. Reading!" to this sentence in the essay "This continues to show that people in poverty aren't charity cases, but rather they are human beings.". Gish on the firstessay I wrote for the class was "Nice I, over the semester, have grown in both literacy and critical thinking. Over the semester in this class I have grown, learned how to effectively draft,Īnd experienced argumentative writing first hand. Me many strategies on how to accustom my writing to a college level. It would just be easier to start writing the final draft first right? No. Rough draft that I would have to revise, draft, and draft again. I never considered a need to plan and prepare an outline, just to write a I started with an idea in my head and go on from there. ![]() This is the typical process for writing an essay, I however as a young high school student ![]() Outline, planning, revising, rough and final draft, grading. Solar panelsĬonvert photons from the sunlight into direct current electricity. Every single day, the sun rises over the horizon shining its rays over the land. Solar panel is able to convert sun energy to electricity. These new technologies could potentially solve some pollution problems that have arisen over the years. There are solar panels, wind and water turbines that harvest the energy within these elements and converts The sun, wind, and water are just some of the natural resources that Even though renewable energy sources like this have beenĭiscovered, people still neglect to convert to them and continue to use fossil fuels. Technologies that are capable of harvesting the sun's rays, water currents, and wind power. Fortunately, scientists and engineers were able to come up with ways to renew energy. Use fossil fuels, the more the planet dies. However, the energy humans have been using is not clean. Remains and turn them into the everyday fuel everyone in the world uses. One of the greatest achievements was converting fossil fuels into energy. During the past couple of centuries, humans were able to accomplish more things than the entirety of human existence. ![]()
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